Blog Up: Big Sisters, Snot Bubbles and OCD
It's only my 2nd ever blog post. I'm a sahm and needed something to do for "me time" as I'm sure y'all can understand all too well! Please do this girl a favor and give it a read and let me know what you think! I need some encouragement, helpful critiquing, and honest opinions on whether it's something I should continue :o)
It's so great your perspective while writing about your fibromyalgia without actually writing ABOUT it.. Love it. Keep going.
My ONLY critique.. And one I've learned through many editors and being an editor is to watch your spacing. A space after your ... It after a period. One space after a period but then not two or three.
Paragraphs. Make paragraphs. It's easier to read and less daunting to the eyes. Chunk it up. Use bold and italics to make a point. Etc.
That's all visual for your reader and will make it look less newbie like.
But I dig it.