Writing help!

Okay so
I'm trying to figure out how she transforms from a cardinal into an angel.
Like do we see the transformation or is it hidden inside like a cloud of dust or something

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Im 22. I love animals. I enjoy hunting and scuba diving. i love my wonderful Boyfriend Gary and my amazing son Kado. when im not outdoors, you can find me with a pencil in one hand and my current novel in the other. ask me about my weight loss.