my book

anyone wanna read my book online? its only 5 chapters so far (chapter 5 isnt all the way complete). I only need 5 people to read it and tell me what they think. i will Private message you the link.

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    sure send me the link what is it about
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          The Key

          The doors to hell are opening! Demons are wreaking havoc on unsuspecting humans all around the world. It's up to one girl and her angel to collect the Orbs of Humanity. In doing so, she unknowingly seals her untimely death. Will her horrible experiences prove that humanity isn't worth saving or will love be enough to save the human race?

          and a little better description of
          The Key
          Poor little RJ has been used and abused by everyone. She hasn't been wanted, needed or cared for since her dad died several years ago.
          One day after a tragic encounter, She follows a bird, she believes to be her father reincarnated, farther into the cave. As she goes deeper and deeper into the earth she sees a light. She heads towards it. But falls down a cave shaft. She is thrown into a dream. God has a mission for her.
          She is to collect orbs all around the world in order to close the door to Hell. One by one they will be absorbed into her body, completing the Key.
          She is given a companion to protect her. If she doesn't get these orbs in time the devil will be released. He wishes to destroy humanity in order to create his own demonic race. She doesn't know if the people deserve to live after how they treated her.
          Angel knew that by taking this job that she would be united with her soulmate. And it would mean she would not be able to be reincarnated with her in the future. Angel keeps the secret of their fate from RJ because she wants her to be happy for once in her life.
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            About Andrea Mouser
            Current: Sacramento, California
            Birth: June 03
            On Moms.com since: Mar 16, 2014
            Im 22. I love animals. I enjoy hunting and scuba diving. i love my wonderful Boyfriend Gary and my amazing son Kado. when im not outdoors, you can find me with a pencil in one hand and my current novel in the other. ask me about my weight loss.